Hi Starlyn, I like the way you managed to us the cover of the book as the background to your work. I think next time you should start your explanation with 'The visit was special because . . .' and remember to reread your work and check it makes sense. Do you remember a special time with your grandad?
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Hi Starlyn, I like the way you managed to us the cover of the book as the background to your work. I think next time you should start your explanation with 'The visit was special because . . .' and remember to reread your work and check it makes sense. Do you remember a special time with your grandad?
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