recount about the pool
I woke up in the morning I did not no it was pool picnic day. I rushed to get my clothes on for school then I went to school like a flash and I bought my ticket for the pool.next we went to the lien at the pool we were going to do a duathlon.
my team win we were so tired after I went to the pool to have a swim next we went on the boom pools we do cool as booms in the pool.
After that we got some lunch at the pool I was so hungry I got me a sausage to eat then my mum got me some popcorn to eat too.while my mum was eating I went to do some booms was friends over there.
After that we have to get dress so we can go home and go back to school.
Hi this is my writing again it about the pools it was so cool at the pools I hope you like it.
1 comments:
Hi starlyn you had done a great job on your writing you just need too put captial letters in your writing.
You are doing a great job!
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